[原创]小女孩 018 秋叶OK

秋叶  <br><br>片片秋叶<br>轻轻飘落<br>一片 二片 三片......<br>片片是我心痛<br><br>晕倒 剪断一段错<br>醒来 摘下一酸果

AUTUMN LEAF
- by Rose Lu

One after another autumn leaves
Flying down gently
“one, … two,… n’ three…”
every leaf represents my heartbreak

Cut off a mistake in my faint
n’ pick a sour fruit upon wakening



引文:
001roselu 写道:

片片秋叶
轻轻飘落
一片 二片 三片......
片片是我心痛

晕倒 剪断一段错
醒来 摘下一酸果

修改后


AUTUMN LEAF
- by Rose Lu

One after another autumn leaves
Flying down gently
“one, … two,…  three…”
every leaf represents my heartbreak

Cut a mistake during my pass out
pick a sour fruit upon awakening



引文:
001roselu 写道:

秋叶

片片秋叶
轻轻飘落
一片 二片 三片......
片片是我心痛

晕倒 剪断一段错
醒来 摘下一酸果