登录注册
社区应用 最新帖子 精华区 社区服务 会员列表 统计排行
主题 : 东海仙子:冰花诗一首英译《放你走》
冰花 离线
级别: 论坛版主

显示用户信息 
楼主  发表于: 2013-08-30   

东海仙子:冰花诗一首英译《放你走》

放你走


Let You Go


BY Rose Lu(Binghua)  Tr. East Sea Fairy
朋友  不要否认
Your heart is already not here.
心已不在这头
Do not deny it, my friend!
也不必销踪匆匆
And you don’t need to withdraw in haste
劝君稍微等等
Please wait for a while
让我送你一程
And let me give you a ride

来  共同思量
Come on. Let’s weigh and consider
飞逝之时光
About the time that flied past
谁与谁为伴儿
Who has accompanied whom?
交错起伏的热情冲动
The confused passions rises and falls on impulse
行为背叛了初衷
The manner betrayed the original intentions
可珍的同情之眼波
The fluid glance of sympathy worth being cherished
熄灭着爱的烈火
That is putting out the fire of love
必是记忆之疚处
Must be the guilty part in the memory
必是情感之创伤
And the wound of affection

最后求解的战场
Ultimately, on the warfield for a solution
一个耐着性子奉陪
One keeps the other company patiently
一个虔诚地奋争
While the other fighting faithfully
厌恋战  喜输赢
Hates to continue it and prefer a quick lose and win
该不该互相轻视  不能
Should we ignore each other? No
骄傲的阳光高高在上
Isn’t the proud Sun high up there
不也吸吮着大地的琼浆
Also suckling the wine of the earth?

只要有过一次
There would be lifetime respect and enjoyment
爱的目光交融
Once there is
就是一生的尊敬和享受
An eye contact of love

一颗小小的心啊
Oh, a little heart
囊括了千姿万态的宇宙
Holding the colorful universe
来人间旅游
Coming to the human world on a tour
只想付出
Just wants to give
没想索求
But not to take
悟一点人生
To understand a little of life
要做几回死囚
It needs to be a convict awaiting execution for several times

小鸟吻别蔷薇后  轻唱
The little bird croons after kissing the rose
白鹤彻悟后  高翔
The white crane flies to the ninth sky after understanding
你急着离去吗
Are you eager to take the leave?

Then I

Let

You

Go.

评价一下你浏览此帖子的感受

精彩

感动

搞笑

开心

愤怒

无聊

灌水
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog
二句三年得,

一吟双泪流。

知音如不赏,

归卧故山秋。
冰花 离线
级别: 论坛版主

显示用户信息 
沙发  发表于: 2013-08-30   
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog
二句三年得,

一吟双泪流。

知音如不赏,

归卧故山秋。
冰花 离线
级别: 论坛版主

显示用户信息 
板凳  发表于: 2013-11-24   
Let You Go


BY Rose Lu (Bing hua)  Tr. East Sea Fairy


Your heart is already not here.
Do not deny it, my friend!
And you don’t need to withdraw in haste
Please wait for a while
And let me give you a ride

Come on. Let’s weigh and consider
About the time that flied past
Who has accompanied whom?
The confused passions rises and falls on impulse
The manner betrayed the original intentions
The fluid glance of sympathy worth being cherished
That is putting out the fire of love
Must be the guilty part in the memory
And the wound of affection

Ultimately, on the warfield for a solution
One keeps the other company patiently
While the other fighting faithfully
Hates to continue it and prefer a quick lose and win
Should we ignore each other? No
Isn’t the proud Sun high up there
Also suckling the wine of the earth?

There would be lifetime respect and enjoyment
Once there is
An eye contact of love

Oh, a little heart
Holding the colorful universe
Coming to the human world on a tour
Just wants to give
But not to take
To understand a little of life
It needs to be a convict awaiting execution for several times

The little bird croons after kissing the rose
The white crane flies to the ninth sky after understanding
Are you eager to take the leave?
Then I
Let
You
Go.
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/binghuablog
二句三年得,

一吟双泪流。

知音如不赏,

归卧故山秋。
描述
快速回复

验证问题:
3 * 6 = ? 正确答案:18
按"Ctrl+Enter"直接提交