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影云 10-19-2004 13:34

Illusion of Love

Illusion of Love

Distant night winds cast a spell

A flying horse
Rises from the flowing mist
Over the river of Tears
Slowly
Stretching its wings
Ascending into an abyss
Of Unknown

Leaving a burning heart
Cooling in darkness
Until it’s lit up with peace

作舟 10-19-2004 17:59
Illusion



Distant wind casts a spell
Over my night

A winged horse
Rises from the floating mist
Over a salty river
Slowly
Stretching its wings
Ascending into the unknown
darkness

The branded heart
Left in the dark
Cooling
Calming
Eventually healed
By peace

影云 10-19-2004 19:14
QUOTE (作舟 @ Oct 19 2004, 05:59 PM)
Illusion



Distant wind casts a spell
Over my night

A winged horse
Rises from the floating mist
Over a salty river
Slowly
Stretching its wings
Ascending into the unknown
darkness

The branded heart
Left in the dark
Cooling
Calming
Eventually healed
By peace

ZZ,好喜欢你改的。
你的语言有种我说不出的神奇,非常的可感。。美味了我的平淡,加深了我的内涵。。。

谢谢。。。 smile.gif em003.gif

作舟 10-19-2004 19:34
u r very welcome!!


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