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冰花 07-23-2004 06:09

[原创]小女孩 009 怎么办 OKOKOK

  怎么办

魯冰花

穿好漂亮的衣裙
镜前 照来照去
点头了自己的美丽
脚步却在犹豫
敲开门
惊喜 一只脚迈进门里
冷淡 另只脚还在门外

冰花 07-23-2004 10:47
请教大小首长, 我想在008后边加上"怎么办", 可我不会,请帮忙.还有, 我想把玫瑰园都改成"小女孩".

Troublemaker 07-23-2004 11:09
找斑竹!

冰花 07-23-2004 11:32
QUOTE (Troublemaker @ Jul 23 2004, 11:09 AM)
找斑竹!

多谢Troublemaker 提醒和引导 OK, 请小平军长版竹帮帮忙! Thanks!!!! em028.gif

冰花 07-27-2004 07:12
QUOTE (Troublemaker @ Jul 23 2004, 11:09 AM)
找斑竹!

不用麻烦版竹们了.

冰花 09-16-2017 15:39
    

冰花 10-05-2017 15:30
What To Do
 
Rose Lu

Putting on my beautiful blouse and skirt
I look in the mirror again and again
Satisfied with my appealingness  
But with steps hesitating

Knocking door open,
I’m so surprised that one of my feet steps into it
but so cold that the other remains outside.

冰花 10-05-2017 15:44
What To Do

By Rose Lu

Edited By Richard Tornello and William Marr , Zhuxiaodi

Putting on my beautiful blouse and skirt
I look in the mirror again and again
Satisfied with my look
yet, my feet hesitate.

Door knocked, open.
He's thrilled that one of my feet steps in
the other feet hesitates and remains outside -
but for his coldness 

冰花 06-06-2018 07:52
Richard Tornello


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