影云，你对诗音乐的悟力让我佩服！写这首时，我的确在试图混合诗与歌的基因。比如Tom Waits的东西。如Ｔ．Ｗ．的音乐，我也不好确定它是否摇滚，或金属含量的高低，而是一种爵士摇滚与赋格（Fugue ..]]>
这首诗歌，初读给我的感觉是摇滚，特别是HARD ROCK所带来的那种感受：撕裂的喧
嚣；头脑里立时有着一副画面：血淋淋 --- 那是被生活划下的道道伤口。

细读之后，我被它深深吸引，不单是诗歌所 ..]]> thank you Y.Y. for the thoughtful feedback!!

trying to find a "bloody" pic for it, but couldn't find it A very mature poem! The “i” sound in the poem speeds up my reading, very smooth!
And this stanza is very classic.
“ Remember---
this is Sunset Boulevard
where heaven meets hell “

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