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河水溢出堤岸
柳枝摇点水面
不是轻浮 不是漂

海水拥抱沙滩
浪花抚摸石礁
不是轻浮 不是漂

1。

It&#39;s neither frivolous nor drifty 

TR 。非马(&nbsp;&nbsp;William Marr&nbsp;&nbsp;)
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 <description><![CDATA[试译与赏读冰花的《不是轻浮 不是漂》 
文/陈美翎 
2009年11月29日，星期日 





不是輕浮 Neither Flighty&nbsp;&nbsp;不是漂 Neither Adrift

河水溢出堤岸&nbsp;&nbsp;River water spills over its banks
柳枝搖點水面&nbsp;&nbsp;On its surface willow strips whip
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 <description><![CDATA[牛津才子译:

不是轻浮不是漂 

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 冰花

河水溢出堤岸
柳枝摇点水面
不是轻浮&nbsp;&nbsp;不是漂

海水拥抱沙滩
浪花抚摸石礁
不是轻浮&nbsp;&nbsp;不是漂

They’re not Frivolous or Drifting

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 <description><![CDATA[你换头象啦, 差点认错人, 我也用过这个头象!

谢谢光临!

又见到你很高兴!


引用第13楼二两于04-02-2007 04:33发表的&nbsp; :
欣赏完诗.再加上诗歌点评,加深理解,印象深刻.喜欢.    ]]></description>
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 <description><![CDATA[嗯,谢谢灵姐!

那就回归自然啦!

引用第11楼Ling1984于03-31-2007 17:42发表的  :
冰花   我也觉得原诗最好   蓄积不发  浮溢的随它  轻抚的暗自风雅  点到为止的带些慧黠]]></description>
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另坛人的回复:

]原帖由 先磨 于 2007-3-31 11:15 发表 http://www.writingisfun.org/images/common/back.gif
1好些。

河水__溢出__堤岸    (漫出,溢出)
柳枝___摇点_水面     &nbsp; (摇点,飞吻)
不是轻浮 不是漂

海水__飞溅___沙滩  (飞溅, 拥抱)
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1.(上边用文中用的)

不是轻浮 不是漂

河水溢出堤岸
柳枝摇点水面
不是轻浮 不是漂

海水拥抱沙滩
浪花抚摸石礁
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2.不是轻浮 不是漂

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Translation BY MENGWEN


River overflows the bank
Willow branches sway and spatter the water
It’s not frivolity, nor drifts

Seawater cuddles the sand beach
Wave sprays pet the rocks
It’s not frivolity, nor drifts


修改方案:

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冰花诗赏析： 不是轻浮 不是漂

BY 斧

河水溢出堤岸
柳枝摇点水面
不是轻浮 不是漂

海水拥抱沙滩
浪花抚摸石礁
不是轻浮 不是漂


这首小诗很值得玩味，因为这短短的六行三十八字里有着丰富的内涵。我欣赏她，
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