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楼主  发表于: 2004-12-02   

A Good Ordinary Autumn Day

Found this classroom work in my daughter's backpack.
Feel a little bit touched inside.
She is seven years old.

By Sindy Lee
Jax Beach Elementary School
Second Grade





Use your five senses when you think of a fall day. Write words and phrases to describe an autumn day. Then write a description of an autumn day. Make your reader feels like that he or she is with you on that day.



A Good Ordinary Autumn Day


Some colorful leaves of red, green, orange, and brown and a hint of yellow……


Fresh vegetables and fruits, they are nice and ripe, m m m m….. pumpkins, squashes, oranges and apples, too.


I feel the trees, their barks are darkening. How Wonderful!!!


In the woods has a setting of bright rays of light, red, yellow, green and purple …. There is also a soft breeze coming through, as gentle as a small child blowing a whistle.


This is just a good ordinary autumn day.
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沙发  发表于: 2004-12-06   
二年级可以写出这样的诗句!好好培养啊!
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