Rose,
Your poetry is getting trickier!
Quite a bit of challenge. Oh well, see if I can keep up with you. See what I have below, for fun!
Good luck!
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A PATCH OF WHITE CLOUD
- by Rose Lu
A patch of white cloud is carrying
love, floating n’ flying
The overloaded love
is overflowing
down
stream
by
stream
as
t
e
a
r
s
m
i
s
s
i
n
g
rises
strand
by
strand
till dream is ended
An autumn leaf is dragging
the remnants of the dream around
引文:
001roselu 写道:
一朵白云
BY 冰花
一朵白云
载着爱 飘飞
爱超重了
流
下
绵
绵
的
眼
泪
升
起
缕
缕
的
思
念
梦清醒了
一片秋叶
拖着梦的 凋零
9/20/2004晨
非常感谢可乐和10235742(文曲星)的帮忙!
