东海仙子, 牛津才子译冰花诗一首英译（诗之光）

东海仙子冰花诗一首英译（诗之光）

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诗之光
Radiance of Rhymes
By Rose Lu(Binghua) Tr. East Sea Fairy
 
原来  诗本是发光体
It turns out that rhymes are radiant bodies
只需要有人来点亮
Which only need to be kindled.
 
你来了
You come
你带着微笑来了
With a smile
你带着玫瑰来了
And roses
你的微笑点亮了光
Your smile kindles the light
你的玫瑰点燃了诗情
And your roses its poetic splendor
 
诗在光里诞生
A poem comes to life in light
你在诗中重生
And both you and me
我在诗中重生
Revive in it.
 
我在诗中写诗
I compose rimes in rhymes
我写诗就是对你写生
What I write is drawing from you
我的诗是折射光
My rhymes are refracting lights
我的诗是折射你的光
That refract you
 
你是光  是最亮的光
You’re light, the brightest light
我是诗  是最美的诗
And I’m a poem, the finest one
 
于是我与你
Then in the empire of poetry
在诗的王国里
You and I bathe together
一同沐浴诗之光
In the radiance of rhymes

诗之光

冰花

原来 诗本是发光体
只需要有人来点亮

你来了
你带着微笑来了
你带着玫瑰来了
你的微笑点亮了光
你的玫瑰点燃了诗情

诗在光里诞生
你在诗中重生
我在诗中重生

我在诗中写诗
我写诗就是对你写生
我的诗是折射光
我的诗是折射你的光

你是光  是最亮的光
我是诗  是最美的诗

于是我与你
在诗的王国里
一同沐浴诗之光


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英释：冰花之《诗之光》！

诗之光      
Flashes of Brilliance from Poems


原来  诗本是发光体

A poem originally possesses a luminous body

只需要有人来点亮

That awaits someone's kindling only



你来了

You appear before me

你带着微笑来了

Smiling with roses

你带着玫瑰来了

In hand

你的微笑点亮了光

Your smiles kindle a flame

你的玫瑰点燃了诗情

And your roses sparkle with the brilliance





诗在光里诞生

Where a poem was born

你在诗中重生

And in it you were reborn

我在诗中重生

And in it I was reborn



我在诗中写诗

And I compose a poem in a poem

我写诗就是对你写生

In which there’s a drawing of you

我的诗是折射光

My lyrics are refraction

我的诗是折射你的光

In which you are refracted



你是光  是最亮的光

You are the luminosity, the brightest light

我是诗  是最美的诗

And I’m a lyric, the most beautiful poem



于是我与你

Thus you and I start to,

在诗的王国里

To dwell in the realm of poetry

一同沐浴诗之光

And immerse ourselves in the brilliance


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Light of Poems
By Rose Lu (Bing hua) Tr. East Sea Fairy


It turns out that poems are radiant bodies
Which only need to be kindled.

You come
With a smile
And roses
Your smile kindles the light
And your roses its poetic splendor


A poem comes to life in light
And both you and me
Revive in it.

I compose rimes in rhymes
What I write is drawing from you
My rhymes are refracting lights
That refract you

You’re light, the brightest light
And I’m a poem, the finest one

Then in the empire of poetry
You and I bathe together
In the light of poems

诗之光
Light of Poems
By Rose Lu(Binghua) Tr. East Sea Fairy



原来  诗本是发光体

It turns out that poems are radiant bodies

只需要有人来点亮

Which only need to be kindled.



你来了

You come

你带着微笑来了

With a smile

你带着玫瑰来了

And roses

你的微笑点亮了光

Your smile kindles the light

你的玫瑰点燃了诗情

And your roses its poetic splendor



诗在光里诞生

A poem comes to life in light

你在诗中重生

And both you and me

我在诗中重生

Revive in it.



我在诗中写诗

I compose rimes in rhymes

我写诗就是对你写生

What I write is drawing from you

我的诗是折射光

My rhymes are refracting lights

我的诗是折射你的光

That refract you



你是光  是最亮的光

You’re light, the brightest light

我是诗  是最美的诗

And I’m a poem, the finest one



于是我与你

Then in the empire of poetry

在诗的王国里

You and I bathe together

一同沐浴诗之光

In the light of poems