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冰花诗一首英译（不是轻浮不是漂）(2013-12-09 11:16:51)转载▼标签： 诗一首冰花英译浪花河水 分类： 汉语诗歌英文翻译 
不是轻浮 不是漂
Neither Frivolous Nor Flirtatious
By Rose Lu (Binghua) Tr. East Sea Fairy



河水溢出堤岸

Spills over its bank the waterway

柳枝摇点水面

And willow branches its surface skim and sway

不是轻浮  不是漂

It's neither frivolous, nor flirtatious.



海水拥抱沙滩

The brine cuddles the coast tightly

浪花抚摸石礁

The sprays softly rap the reefs

不是轻浮  不是漂

It's neither light,nor flighty.


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Neither Frivolous Nor Flirtatious
By Rose Lu (Bing hua) Tr. East Sea Fairy



Spills over its bank the waterway
And willow branches its surface skim and sway
It's neither frivolous, nor flirtatious.



The brine cuddles the coast tightly
The sprays softly rap the reefs
It's neither light, nor flighty.

Neither Frivolous Nor Flirtatious

By Rose Lu (Bing hua) Tr. East Sea Fairy

Brims over its brim the waterway
And willow withe does its surface skim and sway
It's neither frivolous, nor flirtatious.

The brine cuddles the coast tight
The spray softly raps the rock
It's neither flighty, nor light.

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不是轻浮 不是漂

河水溢出堤岸
柳枝摇点水面
不是轻浮 不是漂

海水拥抱沙滩
浪花抚摸石礁
不是轻浮 不是漂


It's neither frivolous nor drifty

  译文/非马( Tr  William Marr  )
        
Water in the river swells over its banks  
Willow branches brush the water
It's neither frivolous nor drifty

Water in the ocean embraces the beaches
Waves caress the reefs
It's neither frivolous nor drifty