不管谁的生日

Do You Remember?
1.

Do you remember
the tender branches
of youth
shaken by the messenger
from the moon,
the fruit of longing
heavier than wind
ripened by the touch
of a suffering prince?

2.

Do you remember
how small and laborious
your steps were
trying to grow
out of innocence
in this muddy world?

3.

Once outside
the womb,
one step
at a time.

4.

Do you still remember
that forgotten song
in the abandoned garden
where you befriended
with the strange hands
of life and death
and the coolness
of its sweet tasting
shadows called
love?

5.

Do you remember
what tomorrow said
as you travel toward
the beginning of
a whisper, a gesture
of wordless love that's buried
deep under the disguise
of years of waiting, making
and remaking of what's not
yours, but ours in a house
strange
to us all?

作舟的英文诗里，最喜欢这篇。

准备和一首。

Troublemaker,

well-said !! no, not to mean to challenge

it always helps to hear what others think about my poems ...

小平，

Happy-B Day !!!! How young are you??? hahaha....

这个MAKER, 到处MAKE TROUBLE.

管它呢? 今天是我生日.
虽然我是那三亿分之一, 先谢谢了.
谢谢作舟这首<问>.

CHALLENGE我?
哈!
见仁见智了.

虽然满篇都是"do you remember?
但我读到的却都是激情的渴望和向往,
重点不在那曾经的tender, innocence, coolness
抑或abandoned.
所有的都已被埋葬.
因为曾经的suffering ,
便成就了而今的tasting和making
and remaking
作者要的是无尽的, 无关以往的, 无以言表的LOVE.
作者在张开双臂等待着...

洗耳
恭听

军长
请吧

还不信呀?
我有点鬼工夫吆.
要不我解释解释让你核对核对?

算了
咱还是尽在不言中吧!
P:

Really?

Good!

Thanks!

新作吗?
厉害!
这个, 俺看懂了.