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自 白


My Confession


BY Rose Lu(Binghua)  Tr. East Sea Fairy
我
I,
一个感情至上的人
A woman who loves love more than all,
一根火柴点燃了青春
Lighted youth with a match
情感的火焰烤错了人
But the blaze of my affection thawed out the wrong guy

我
I'm
一个单纯的人
A naïve woman
心儿没有染上点丝灰尘
With her dustless heart
始终为我那个他
Sealed for my HE
封存
Evermore.



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My Confession


BY Rose Lu(Binghua)  Tr. East Sea Fairy

I,
A girl who loves love more than all,
Lighted youth with a match
But the blaze of my affection thawed out the wrong guy


I'm
A naïve girl
With my dustless heart
Sealed for my HE
Evermore.

修改后;

自 白
我
一个感情至上的人
一根火柴点燃了青春
情感的火焰烤错了人

我
一个单纯的人
心儿没有染上丝毫灰尘
始终为我的那个他
封存

My Confession
I,
A girl who loves feeling more than anything else ,
Lighted youth with a match
But the blaze of my affection thawed out the wrong guy

I'm
A naïve girl
My virgin heart is sealed
for HIM
Forever.

My Confession

By Rose Lu
Tr. East Sea Fairy
Edited By ZhuXiaodi , William Marr

I,
A girl who loves feeling more than anything else,
Lighted youth with a match
But the blaze of my affection thawed out the wrong guy

I'm
A naïve girl
My virgin heart is still sealed
For my loved [/post]